Suggestions for Improvement
1. There were at least two chapters that had EXACTLY the same text. Then the final chapter was SO much longer than all the others. Had the story been properly broken up, there would've been no need for repeat narrative on ANY chapter. Please work on this. It is sloppy.
2. Please provide us with information for how you tier the requirements for different levelled players. At what level does a forest have to do the high-level tasks? How many tiers of difficulty are there and what is the range of player levels for each tier? Adding a note that the acts for each chapter "may be different" for lower-level players really is not very useful for such players.