Leaping Leprechaun Limerick Contest! - WINNERS ANNOUNCED

[FlyingMonkee]

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Leaping Leprechaun Limerick Contest

Aside from the Caption and Drawing contest, there are other ways to be expressive! We at TeamLava have a poetic and imaginative side as well, with words! Do you think you can come up with the most funny and creative limerick, while also referencing at least one of your favorite TeamLava games? Try your hand at our Leaping Leprechaun Limerick Contest!

Contest:
Come up with a creative Limerick expressing something about our games!

Rules:
- The Limerick must follow the guidelines of what a Limerick should be.
*Check out these two references for more information*
Limerick Writing 101 (http://www.gigglepoetry.com/poetryclass/limerickcontesthelp.html)
Additional Help to Write a Limerick (http://www.creative-writing-now.com/how-to-write-a-limerick.html)
- You must make a reference to a TeamLava game or in-game item.
- All content must be forum appropriate (Forum Rules and Policies (http://forums.teamlava.com/showthread.php?22953-Renewed-Enforcing-of-TL-Forum-Rules-Please-Read-%281-16-12%29)).
- The ten players with the best Limericks which follow all of the rules will win!
- Winners will be selected based on how funny the Limerick is and how creative the usage of the TeamLava game or item is. TeamLava will have the final say, but the community is encouraged to support an entry.
- Your Limerick must have a connecting Title to it
- Your Limerick must be posted as a reply to this thread no later than Tuesday, March 19 by 12pm PDT.
- There is a limit of ONE Limerick per player.

Prizes:
- There will be ten winners, as described above, who will win 30 Gems for the game of their choice (150 Gems or Gold for newer games).
- You can select only one TeamLava game to receive the Gems or Gold.

HAVE FUN!

WINNERS

Ode To Fruitful Dragon (http://forums.teamlava.com/showthread.php?47966-Leaping-Leprechaun-Limerick-Contest!-JUDGING-ENTRIES&p=566911&viewfull=1#post566911) - LilMzB4Life
The Young Lady Who Bakes (http://forums.teamlava.com/showthread.php?47966-Leaping-Leprechaun-Limerick-Contest!-JUDGING-ENTRIES&p=567035&viewfull=1#post567035) - chocolat_89
The Brash Baker (http://forums.teamlava.com/showthread.php?47966-Leaping-Leprechaun-Limerick-Contest!-JUDGING-ENTRIES&p=567341&viewfull=1#post567341) - jopazz
Dragon's Lair (http://forums.teamlava.com/showthread.php?47966-Leaping-Leprechaun-Limerick-Contest!-JUDGING-ENTRIES&p=567468&viewfull=1#post567468) - SoneaDragon
Infinite Misses (http://forums.teamlava.com/showthread.php?47966-Leaping-Leprechaun-Limerick-Contest!-JUDGING-ENTRIES&p=568359&viewfull=1#post568359) - jonathanharker
Breeding Woes (http://forums.teamlava.com/showthread.php?47966-Leaping-Leprechaun-Limerick-Contest!-JUDGING-ENTRIES&p=569041&viewfull=1#post569041) - Shini02
Mist Dragons (http://forums.teamlava.com/showthread.php?47966-Leaping-Leprechaun-Limerick-Contest!-JUDGING-ENTRIES&p=569424&viewfull=1#post569424) - duckling77
When I Forget (http://forums.teamlava.com/showthread.php?47966-Leaping-Leprechaun-Limerick-Contest!-JUDGING-ENTRIES&p=570028&viewfull=1#post570028) - Bakemoo
Anything but Brownies (http://forums.teamlava.com/showthread.php?47966-Leaping-Leprechaun-Limerick-Contest!-JUDGING-ENTRIES&p=571484&viewfull=1#post571484) - imimxo
Dragon Mother, Where Do Babies Come From? (http://forums.teamlava.com/showthread.php?47966-Leaping-Leprechaun-Limerick-Contest!-JUDGING-ENTRIES&p=572238&viewfull=1#post572238) - kandeegrlz

[jacksonbelobrajdic]

There once was a dog called Bo
And also a cat named Lo
And also a fuzzy little mouse
He lived in a tiny little house
His name we might never know

Well Bo was very mean
And Lo was really quite lean
And the mouse was shy
All he ever ate was pie
He was never really seen


Storm8 ID: jacksonbelobrajdic
Game to receive gems: Pet Shop Story
Shop Name:Fizz Pets

[jenj1971]

Jen's Hen

There once was a girl named Jen
She would play Farm Story at ten
She watered and planted
But was still disenchanted
She needed more gems for a hen...
����
Farm Story: Mommy Jen

[RareDragonProbability]

Dragon Mother's Ceremonial Sun Robes

Dragon mother was simply in need
But the player was surrounded in greed
Mother asked him to pay
And he said, "no way!"
The robes were never guaranteed.

ID: RareDragonProbability
Favorite game: Dragon Story
(PS: I bought Dragon Mother new robes)

[CuddlyDragon]

I love this contest idea! :I

[xoxjenn]

You Be The Judge

There once was a Bakery called Oh Fudge,
Where it's customers were the judge,
They baked all day,
& the employees say,
It's where your wallet won't hold a grudge.

Gems to Bakery Story.
Id: xoxJenn
Shop Name: Oh Fudge

[LeyaMey]

Stop


There once was a Hunter named Lee
Who captured dragons, you see
A plead and a sob
I told him to stop
And he gave Rose back to me.



'Items' used: Hunter, Rose (Dragon Story)
ID: LeyaMey
Favorite Game: Dragon Story

[Ckitty21]

Wrong Dress

There once was a girl named Carly
She received the wrong dress for her party
It was all dirty and torn
And also included a horn
Poor Carly was not very hearty

Items: Any dress in avatar closet
(Carly ordered a pretty dress from the catalogue, but the delivery came out wrong.)
Game: Fashion Story

[OnCloudDivine]

Loretta gazed out of the window
I asked what had her so low
She whipped out her whisk
Gave me a "Tsk! Tsk!"
Said, "I'm still waiting for that cup of Joe!

I referenced one of the first goals in Bakery Story, which I think all BS players have a particular sentimentality attached.. I'm so happy writing is acknowledged as an art in this contest!
Id: OnCloudDivine
Fav. Game: Bakery Story

[lmac10]

The one that got away

Into the breeding den they go
Desperately hoping a diamond would glow
A fail time hit
Then the swear fit
T'was another Island to show

Fav Game: Dragon Story

[kooky panda]

The one that got away

Into the breeding den they go
Desperately hoping a diamond would glow
A fail time hit
Then the swear fit
T'was another Island to show

Fav Game: Dragon Story
OHH I can relate to this one.. LOL....



All of these are so cool guys!!

[funnyrandomness5112]

A Dragon's Surprise!

There Once was A ForestFire Dragon,
Who Lived in a Covered wagon.,
He Woke One Morn'
To See That He'd grown A Horn!

He went to his keeper,
But to his Surprise, It was A Creeper!
He Went to Dragon Mother,
She Said he was like No Other!

He was Filled with joy,
And he went back to eating his bok choi!


Fav Game: Dragon Story
Isle name: Dragons Place

[creepycupcake]

Jenni's Lament

In Dragon Story there's Jenni
Her hours spent playing are plenty
But if truth be told
She runs out of gold
So her frustrations be many!

ID: creepycupcake
Game for prize: Dragon Story

[missyjlane]

There once was a place called castle story

There once was a awesome place called castle story
Where you do all kinds of quests for glory
With help of a tree girl named Ivy
And old Thomas who is quite lively
you might even see a fairy in my inventory
So please add me so we can meet at castle story

Oops I forgot to put
Fav game castle story
Id: missyjlane

[sugarmilkppm]

Love Bytes

Through this sweet door lies an ethereal bliss
white truffle, love potion, cherry kiss
My sapphire gems have disappeared into the abyss
to reincarnate as a giant lime and giant gummy bear, nothing here is amiss!
Sugar, milk, sweetness and light, of ephemeral dreams we reminisce

ID: sugarmilkppm
Bakery Story

[efoote]

I❤bakery story

There is a fun game that I play
I can play and play ev'ryday
It's usually free
But sometimes you see
I end up baking all day!

Gems for bakery story
ID efoote

Fun contest!

[lmac10]

I❤bakery story

There is a fun game I play
I can play and play ev'ryday
It's usually free
But sometimes you see
I end up baking all day!

Gems for bakery story
ID efoote

Fun contest!

nice one!!

[LilMzB4Life]

Ode To Fruitful Dragon

A fruitful dragon I be
A jester for all to see
With my tongue stuck out
"I'll get that apple", I shout!!!
Thats been hanging from my head since I was three

Favorite Game: Dragon Story
ID: LilMzB4Life

[Cupmeetscake]

Sue's Dream

One starry night a girl by Sue.
Dreamt of pie, cheesecake, pops, fondue.
Cake, bread, cookies, icecream.
Her most sweet sugar dream.
Sue's Bakery Story came true.



Id: Cupmeetscake
Bakery Story Gems


Good luck everyone:)

[chocolat_89]

There is a young lady who bakes,
Lots of batches of red velvet cakes,
But ask if she eats them,
And she replies, with good reason,
?No thank-you, I?m watching my weight!?

Game: Bakery Story
In-game item: Red Velvet cake recipe

[mrarfan]

ARFAN'S DREAM

There is a young man who's name is Arfan,
He likes to play with an Ice Cream Dragon,
When the ice cream melts in the sun,
The young man becomes so sad,

Game - Dragon Story
In-Game - Ice Cream Dragon

[OnCloudDivine]

Loretta gazed out of the window
I asked what had her so low
She whipped out her whisk
Have me a "Tsk! Tsk!"
Said, "I'm still waiting for that cup of Joe!

I referenced one of the first goals in Bakery Story, which I think all BS players have a particular sentimentality attached.. I'm so happy writing is acknowledged as an art in this contest!
Id: OnCloudDivine
Fav. Game: Bakery Story

It's supposed to be ?gave? instead of ?have? Sorry! Please edit :(

[Ic3e]

The Sweet Diva

I'm as pretty as I can be
I'm also as sweet as candy
My Cranberry Skirt
And my ******d Shirt
I'm so happy TL made a catalog of me!

Title and limerick inspired by the catalog 'Sweet Diva' of Fashion Story. Mentions of items also included (******d Shirt and Cranberry Skirt).
Fav. game: Fashion Story
ID: Ic3e

[yusefzai]

DINNER AND A SHOW

There is a nice place with a Noodle Show.
Ate there too much I thought my tummy would blow!
I had 9 Egg Drop Soups.
Thats just appetizer, whoops!
Ordered more "To go" and they all went "Whoa!"

Inspired by Restaurant Story's Noodle Show and Egg Drop Soup
I could use the Gems in Bakery Story

[littlekhan]

The Man of our Dreams

A local celebrity named Action Chef Lee.
Chops and dices so fast we all watched with glee!
He cooked Asian dishes.
Granted all tummies' wishes!
I bet all the girls thought "Oh please marry me!"

Used "Action Chef Lee"
gems for Bakery Story please

[yusefzai]

Ode To Fruitful Dragon

A fruitful dragon I be
A jester for all to see
With my tongue stuck out
"I'll get that apple", I shout!!!
Thats been hanging from my head since I was three

Favorite Game: Dragon Story
ID: LilMzB4Life

this is so cute! Best of luck!

[designersae]

There was a cute, cute cat
That is friends with a rat
The rat was kind
But he did mind
About asking his secret:
He says you will regret!
But I know the truth
About the rat named Ruth
He's a leprechaun
And he has no con!
He's cool, he's epic
He gives the best gold you pick!
He is friends with a Paddy dog
He met in the fog!
He even saw a paddy snake
That loved to bake!
The ginger cat named Keen
Was a bit mean
But she still liked Ruth
The rat that told the truth!

One day Ruth
The rat that told the truth
Got lost in the wood
And he knew that wasn't good!
He got lost from his shack!
( It was really a pet shop, but don't tell him that)
He saw a wallaby
And he heard its cry!
Wait. A cry? No it was crying!
Or was it the grass it was frying?
No, surely he knew it was crying
Because it was addicted to buying
Gold: but it didn't have money
Ruth hopped to her like a bunny.
And gave her gold.
The wallaby was very bold
And got happy

[designersae]

Oops I forgot ID designersae
Fave game is. Pet shop story!

[designersae]

"Who did you bring this time?" Asked Tim,
The paddy snake
That loved to bake.
"I brought someone kind,
Some one that won't mind
If you pet her.
Keen started to purr
Even though she was mean
She had always been


That was part two. ID is designersae
And fave game is pet shop story. Hope you like it!

[LilMzB4Life]

this is so cute! Best of luck!

Aaaww, thank you!!! Best of luck to you and everyone else as well!!!

[dragonankeny65]

The baron - castle story

There once was a queen named Pat
For the baron she went to bat
Only to find him needy
And his motives seedy
Even the villagers valentines said he was a rat

[jopazz]

This was fun. :D


The Brash Baker

In the bakery down the road,
the ice cream machine did explode.
Rather than the trash,
the baker was brash,
and served everything A La Mode!


A La Mode is the name of my bakery on Bakery Story. :D

ID: jopazz
favorite game is Bakery Story!

[jenj1971]

Jen's Hen

There once was a girl named Jen
She would play Farm Story at ten
She watered and planted
But was still disenchanted
She needed more gems for a hen...
����
Farm Story: Mommy Jen

My storm8 ID is the same as my forum name: jenj1971

Everyone is doing such a great job with this!!!

[CheerfulFlea]

Oh, the sweet smells of delicious treats
As the customers line up for their seats
The cool ambiance
Puts them in a trance
My bakery is the best place to eat!

My favorite game? You guessed it: Bakery Story
ID: CheerfulFlea

[CheerfulFlea]

Title: Bakery Story Ballad

[finnth12]

I tried, here is mine:


Once there was a boy named Gordon
Who always played his favorite dragon
He bred fairy and wizard pair
Just to get a diamond heir
But instead he got ton of common


ID : finnth12
Favorite game: Dragon Story

[SoneaDragon]

Dragon's Lair

There once was a sack full of gold
with coins that were newer and old.
The hoard of a dragon
which slept like a waggon.
After years it was nothing but mold.

items: Dragon; Gold
favourite game: Dragon Story
Storm8-ID: SoneaDragon

[kwhales]

I love this contest idea! :I

Me too, but now I can't get the rhyming out of my head.

[LilMzB4Life]

I love this contest idea! :I

Same here!!! I love reading all of the very creative rhymes!!! I love poetry and enjoyed creating my own limerick!!! I hope everyone enjoys themselves and have fun with it.

[bumblez08]

Quest for the Sky

There once was a dragon named Brie,
An impressive air type 'twas she;
Feathers fluffed about,
Letting a squawk out,
She spread out her wings to be free.

Game : Dragon Story , ID : BumbleZ08

[RotomGuy]

Dat Dragon
On an island in the middle of the sea,
There was a caretaker, who happened to be me,
Who tried all year long,
Even when he ponged,
To force a 40 hour Infinity.

If somehow I do win:

ID: RotomGuy
Gold to: Dragon Stiry

[RotomGuy]

Dat Dragon
On an island in the middle of the sea,
There was a caretaker, who happened to be me,
Who tried all year long,
Even when he ponged,
To force a 44 hour Infinity.

If somehow I do win:

ID: RotomGuy
Gold to: Dragon Stiry

Gah, meant 40 hours, sorry ;-;

[FrostyLemon]

There once was a monster called Scab
Who ate really hot sheish kebabs.
Then he got gastro
So he became Astro
And gained lots of really blue flab

ID:FrostyLemon
Gold To:Dragon Story

[idestined]

My Gold Dragon has a reputation,
His appetite's the size of a nation,
He will take a big bite,
Before jumping with fright,
Yup, I've sneaked up behind him.

[idestined]

Oops I forgot


Title: Big Bite!
My Gold Dragon has a reputation,
His appetite's the size of a nation,
He will take a big bite,
Before jumping with fright,
Yup, I've sneaked up behind him.
TL game: Dragon Story

[redpearl101]

Once upon a time in a far away land
I designed a home which way I can
A fairy god mother came to visit one day
She said to pray T.L will surely find a way
With their magic wand they will expand the land

St Patrick's day was around the corner
Now hearts will grow fonder
Yet the limited gems and things to buy
Now my neighbors will cry and sigh
They needed gems to keep their honor

A fairy god mother had said to me
Look no further and you will see
Spring is here and goals are near
This time of year
Just let it be

You will have your gems to spend
A lucky leprechaun maybe around the bend
This leprechaun will find the time
To design a home on this land of mine
And now my neighbours The end



Storm 8 ID: redpearl101
Favorite TL Game for prize :Home design Story(original)
Home Name: Aribian nights

[redpearl101]

Sorry correction home name:: Arabian nights

[Kaiser_Bakery]

Creamed Head

There once was a bakery own by a kaiser
Which had a bald and grumpy cashier
He use cream to polished his head
Everynight before he go to the bed
In morning he was creamed by a customer

Id: Kaiser_Bakery
Gems to Bakery story

[adrianssto]

Flying Island

There once was an island flying
Which never really gotten anything
Though lots asked for it
None was be done with it
It's time the island get something

Objects : Empty spaces filled with roads
Favorite Game: Monster Story
Id : adrianssto

This limmerick is referencing to the current Monster Storys condition in the eyes of the players.

[henrylucky]

Here's mine:

Henry and Dragon Story

There was once a boy named Henry
He likes to play Dragon Story
One day, he shouted
"Okay, I'm addicted"
"I want gold for Dragon Story!"

Storm8 ID : henrylucky
Favorite game : Dragon Story

[designersae]

Please forgive me. My I pad didn't post all of my Poe. Again. Ignore the other. This is the good copy!
The rat that told the truth



There was a cute, cute cat
That is friends with a rat
The rat was kind
But he did mind
About asking his secret:
He says you will regret!
But I know the truth
About the rat named Ruth
He's a leprechaun
And he has no con!
He's cool, he's epic
He gives the best gold you pick!
He is friends with a Paddy dog
He met in the fog!
He even saw a paddy snake
That loved to bake!
(He also lived in the Loch Ness lake!)
The ginger cat named Keen
Was a bit mean
But she still liked Ruth
The rat that told the truth!

One day Ruth
The rat that told the truth
Got lost in the wood
And he knew that wasn't good!
He got lost from his shack!
( It was really a pet shop, but don't tell him that)
He saw a wallaby
And he heard its cry!
Wait. A cry? No it was crying!
Or was it the grass it was frying?
No, surely he knew it was crying
Because it was addicted to buying
Gold: but it didn't have money
Ruth hopped to her like a bunny.
And gave her gold.
The wallaby was very bold
And got happy
And stopped being snappy
(Did I mention she was rude?)
And gave Ruth food
And told him her name
As the crowned Pame
And Ruth led her back
To (Its a pet shop!) to his little shack
Where the animals were waiting for him.
"Who did you bring this time?" Asked Tim,
The paddy snake
That loved to bake.
"I brought someone kind,
Some one that won't mind
If you pet her.
Keen started to purr
Even though she was mean
She had always been
Friends with Ruth
The rat that told the truth!

ID: designersae
Fave game: pet shop story.

[KKeatzrockz]

[Repost]


Title: "Who are you?"

In an island, a dragon named Tim
When his friend saw him,
He said "Hey! You are rare."
Then he didn't recognize his friend so he said "Who are you?"
Tim stare 20 minutes later, he realized that it was his friend, Jim

ID: KKeatzrockz
Favorite game: DRAGON STORY!

[adelinutza]

Bountiful Lava stream
Around my Castle I often stray,
Watching my pink cows eat hay
The knights return at night
From a terrible fight
With many golden gifts, hooray!
____________________________

Warm royal notice

Pretty Ivy cooking stew
For the mighty brave knights crew.
Thurston up the fort
Shouts round the court:
"Team Lava, we love you!"
________________________________

I, too, can be brave
Far-away in the forest mist
Knight Bravery has a twist
Skunkupines tumble
Glimmer-trolls grumble
Fearing Excalibur and my fist.
________________________________

Storm8 id: adelinutza
Game: Castle story

[jonathanharker]

INFINITE MISSES


The Infinity Dragon's so rare
They said "Breed Aurora and Air
or Fairy and Wizard
to get that sweet lizard!"
I did, now there's Mists everywhere.

ID: jonathanharker
Game: Dragon Story

[CheerfulFlea]

These limericks are really quite fun
Can't stop now that I have be***
They're stuck in my head
All the rhymes that I've read
So I thought I would add another one

(I know this one doesn't count but it was fun!)

[kyrandia1]

An Unfortunate Name

My dragon, named Pan, is a mess
It's the name I have to confess
He's a turkey you see
And he once said to me
The association is causing much stress

ID Kyrandia1
Dragon Story

[FlyingMonkee]

Great Limericks Guys, keep it going! Try reading them aloud in the tone it's supposed to be spoken as =)

[thiny19]

This is fun! Hope i can make one:-) everyone Are so great!

[thiny19]

here's mine:

Henry and dragon story

there was once a boy named henry
he likes to play dragon story
one day, he shouted
"okay, i'm addicted"
"i want gold for dragon story!"

storm8 id : Henrylucky
favorite game : Dragon story

i love this one!

[thiny19]

Jen's Hen

There once was a girl named Jen
She would play Farm Story at ten
She watered and planted
But was still disenchanted
She needed more gems for a hen...
����
Farm Story: Mommy Jen

Love it!

[thiny19]

nice one!!

Yeah its really nice:-)

[RareDragonProbability]

Here's mine:

Henry and Dragon Story

There was once a boy named Henry
He likes to play Dragon Story
One day, he shouted
"Okay, I'm addicted"
"I want gold for Dragon Story!"

Storm8 ID : henrylucky
Favorite game : Dragon Story

I love the idea of this one, however it doesn't follow the rules of making a limerick, and hence doesn't follow the rules of the contest.

Henry and story do not rhyme
Shouted and addicted do not rhyme
Doesn't seem like its on beat to me, but I can't really tell.

Re-write it. Because I LOVE the idea of it, but it needs it's corrections.

[RareDragonProbability]

Dragon Mother's Ceremonial Sun Robes

Dragon mother was simply in need
But the player was surrounded in greed
Mother asked him to pay
And he said, "no way!"
The robes were never guaranteed.

ID: RareDragonProbability
Favorite game: Dragon Story
(PS: I bought Dragon Mother new robes)

To add on, the reference was to one of the quests/objectives in dragon story. Dragon Mother asks you pay 5,000 coins for new Ceremonial Sun Robes, here I talk about a player (probably me.. (: ) who doesn't want to buy them for her.

[RareDragonProbability]

Yeah its really nice:-)

Yeah I like it too. However it rhymes day with day twice.

[thatgirl444]

True Story! (Quack)

That girl was obsessed with a duck pond
But the box would never respond
She clicked and pressed
And knew no rest
No matter how much she yawned

Her wallet became quite thin
She got frown lines on her chin
What?? Beans for dinner again?
Aren't we on day ten?
Hubby whined and called it a sin

Then one day she lost all hope
Yet her fingers decided to elope
Just one more time
Its not a crime
Her Prize was here!!! She could cope

if i were to win...pls make the gems to restaurant story...yes...the koi pond is now calling my name :)

[Paul__]

The Farmer Mouse

Mouse got out on a hole in the ground then farmed it in and bought a house and lived in it then got flags and put them on the farm .Then the mouse expand his farm and was falling over and over for no reason


Gems in Castle story
ID Eatanddrank189

[Shini02]

" Breeding Woes"

An Androidian Breeder one day
Sent out two of her dragons to "play"
She wanted a Fairy~
not extroidanary
But she got a Fruitful, "Oi Vey!"

Storm8ID: Shini02
Preferred game: Dragon Story

[gundaniumangel]

Storm8ID: ***daniumAngel
Favorite Game: DragonStory

"Whyfor not the Droid?"

A blonde breeder from east coast US
said to her good friend " I must confess
I guess it's quite odd
but I'll switch to ipod
dragon story loves their darned iOs"

[FaithEternal]

Thomas Yearns For A Moat

Tom was once a lonely ole goat.
Though well read, he never did gloat.
He helped his kingdom well,
For Baron cannot prevail!
Or Castle will never get that new moat!

Storm ID: FaithEternal
Favorite Game: Castle Story
Kingdom Name: Paradise

[IceDawn]

The Enchanted Cafe

There's a place called Enchanted Cafe,
Where little sprites go, so they say,
They eat and they drink,
They laugh and they sing.
You know they'll be there night and day.

Reference to Bakery Story (Where possible Gems might go).
ID: IceDawn
Bakery Name: Fruity Bears

[bionicsal]

These limericks are really quite fun
Can't stop now that I have be***
They're stuck in my head
All the rhymes that I've read
So I thought I would add another one

(I know this one doesn't count but it was fun!)

Love it <3 lol

[bionicsal]

To be discreet..

Hardest dragon for me to meet
Is the one so very discreet
cute little fellow,
of green and yellow,
It is the mighty Parakeet!

Game: Dragon Story
ID: BionicSal

[codenameraven]

An Unfortunate Name

My dragon, named Pan, is a mess
It's the name I have to confess
He's a turkey you see
And he once said to me
The association is causing much stress

ID Kyrandia1
Dragon Story

Ok this one is hilarious!

[duckling77]

Mist Dragons
In Dragon Story there is a dragon of mist
when just hatched no arms, legs or fist,
They are really like these
dragons of seabreeze,
but are easier to breed, I insist.

Favourite game: Dragon Story
Storm 8 ID: duckling77

[FaithEternal]

INFINITE MISSES


The Infinity Dragon's so rare
They said "Breed Aurora and Air
or Fairy and Wizard
to get that sweet lizard!"
I did, now there's Mists everywhere.

ID: jonathanharker
Game: Dragon Story


LOL :) Funny and true!

[bumblez08]

WOW, awesome rhyme scheme! :)

[bumblez08]

WOW. awesome rhyme scheme ! :) ^^^

[ashley049]

~A Dream~

Im cooking foods and i need to prepare
But the food seems to have an awful glare
It glares at me with its eye
It scares me and so I cry
I woke up and realize it was a horrible nightmare

ID- ashley049
Favorite Game- Bakery Story

[jenj1971]

Love it!

Thanks thiny19 :)

[crasedblonde2]

Pet Shop Story is fun
The cats have the dogs on the run
Frogs, turtles, and fish
All you could wish
If only the gems could be won

[saren47]

Fire dragons are red
Water is blue
Wanted a heart dragon
The one that was new
So put them together
But oh so tragic
Cause all I got
was lots o magic


Lana

[saren47]

Fire dragons are red
Water is blue
Wanted a heart dragon
The one that was new
So put them together
But oh so tragic
Cause all I got
was lots o magic


Lana

Oops!

ID: saren47

Prize for Farm Story, please and thank you.

[bercause]

Scoops

Into the bakery walked Pat
She saw Jean-Pierre in his hat
"Vanilla ice cream please"
"That'll take 2 days!" he screamed
Ain't nobody got time for dat!

Storm8 ID: bercause
Game: Bakery Story

[crasedblonde2]

Game is Pet Shop Story
ID is crasesblonde2
Shops name is Diane's

[NoPonyMessesWithMe]

The Cake That Got Away

I went to the oven and preheated it
then I got out the egg and beat it
poured it in a bowl and stuffed in the oven.

I smelled all the smoke and started runnin'
I saw the batter bubblin
Now i feel like blubberin
Its the cake that got away

It was burnt
It was stuck to the pan
It didnt even smell like cake
The cake that got away

ID: NoPonyMessesWithMe
Fave Game: Bakery story
Bakery name: Cher lloyd (there is emoji too)

[bionicsal]

WOW. awesome rhyme scheme ! :) ^^^

Cheers :)

[KuddlyBunny]

The Cake That Was Meant To Be
I threw in the flour
I threw in the eggs
i tossed in some chocolate
I tossed in some milk

I mixed and mixed until I could mix no more
Then I tossed it in and waited
I waited and waited

The timer dinged and i took it out!
I tasted it and then I spit it out!

I meant to put in sugar
But instead i put in salt.

The Cake that was meant to be

Game: Bakery Story
ID: KuddlyBunny
Bakery Name: Waddles Da Bear

[henrylucky]

I love the idea of this one, however it doesn't follow the rules of making a limerick, and hence doesn't follow the rules of the contest.

Henry and story do not rhyme
Shouted and addicted do not rhyme
Doesn't seem like its on beat to me, but I can't really tell.

Re-write it. Because I LOVE the idea of it, but it needs it's corrections.

Before, I must say thanks
But, .....

There was once a boy named Henry
He likes to play Dragon Story
One day, he shouted
"Okay, I'm addicted"
"I want gold for Dragon Story!"

They're all same rhyme ! :D

[henrylucky]

Here's mine:

Henry and Dragon Story

There was once a boy named Henry
He likes to play Dragon Story
One day, he shouted
"Okay, I'm addicted"
"I want gold for Dragon Story!"

Storm8 ID : henrylucky
Favorite game : Dragon Story
love this one!

Thanks !!! :D

[Bakemoo]

When I Forget

There once was a man with a tie
Who ordered a fine piece of pie
But lo and behold
It was covered in mold
And on top of the crust grinned a fly

Bakery Story- Bakemoo

[Dior0]

There is a bakery called the best bakery
Were people gatherd with there family
People ate and drinked
And they sang and danced
This is the the best bakery

Gems to bakery story
I'D dior0

[thatgirl444]

When I Forget

There once was a man with a tie
Who ordered a fine piece of pie
But lo and behold
It was covered in mold
And on top of the crust grinned a fly

Bakery Story- Bakemoo

LOL...that made me laugh...just imagined the grinning fly all cozy on the mouldy pie...hehe

[henrylucky]

There is a bakery called the best bakery
Were people gatherd with there family
People ate and drinked
And they sang and danced
This is the the best bakery

Gems to bakery story
I'D dior0

Not drinked but drank...

[Dior0]

There i s a bakery called the best bakery
Were people gather with their family
People dance and sang
And they ate and drank

[Dior0]

There is a bakery called the best bakery
Were people gatherd with there family
People ate and drinked
And they sang and danced
This is the the best bakery

Gems to bakery story
I'D dior0

Sorry I wrote drinked By wrong

[maddymoose2002]

Bakery Story Limerick
There Once was a oh so sweet bakery
With food that had so much bravery
That they hopped in a mouth
And they all went down south
Until no food dared to do it in the sweet bakery
Bakery Called Hogwarts
I.D Maddymoose2002

[maddymoose2002]

plz reply so i can see what i did wrong and so next time i can correct my next limerick (ps im the poet in my class)

[henrylucky]

Bakery Story Limerick

There Once was a oh so sweet bakery
With food that had so much bravery
That they hopped in a mouth
And they all went down south
Until no food dared to do it in the sweet bakery

Bakery called: Hogwarts
I.D: Maddymoose2002

Nope, you're true at all...but, there are too many words in last row (I think... -_-)
(I correct some "miss")Actually, this is first time, I hear about Limerick, even I don't really know what is that, but I read some reference on web...

[OnCloudDivine]

plz reply so i can see what i did wrong and so next time i can correct my next limerick (ps im the poet in my class)

I think the first line could have fewer syllables: "There one was a bakery so sweet

This gives you an easier rhyming word with 'sweet,' since bakery has a hard time rhyming with the 'r' in bravery (not saying it doesn't, just has a hard time): "hungry guests the brave food did meet"

The next two lines would work with a minor tweak... Then, for your ending, you would also need to cut down the syllables: "Until no food dared this large feat" ♥ These are just suggestions, the major thing is to watch your syllable count in the first and last lines.

[faisal01911349250]

Used: Fire Dragon( Dragon Story )

Fire Breathing Dragon

There was a red dragon that breathed fire
It was a thing that Humans and dragons alike admire
Once he fought with a water dragon
And had to be carried off in a wagon
Even though the water dragon was a liar

Storm8: Faisal01911349250
Gold to Dragon Story if I win plz( don't think I will😜)

[nessiexo]

The Scared Neighbor

A neighbor, at least twice a day,
Orders a Banana Split Sundae.
"A Ghost Dessert", I guessed.
With an Iced Scream, he stressed.
Yet he hasn't got my word play.

ID : nessiexo
Favorite Game : Bakery Story
Item used : Banana Split Sundae

[ditiesrealm]

I once found a glimmering wood
All sparkling with magic it stood
Discovered I there,
Knight Sir Thurston stripped bare!
To help him i did what i could...

Storm8 ID: ditiesrealm
Game: Castle Story Valentines Edition
Kingdom Name: rachel's realm

[dollyjanet]

Thurston was wandering bare
And everyone started to stare
He looked high and low
With his bits all on show
As the troll made his clothes disappear

Dollyjanet. Dragon story

[gaclack]

Transitions on the Farm
As the sunchoke begin to grow
And the trees' branches hang low
By the birdseed feast
A nice day at least
Well, all until I saw that crow...

Storm8 ID: Gaclack
References from, and gems to: Farm Story

[imimxo]

Anything but Brownies

Hello my dear and sweet neighbor,
We don't really know each other
I'm asking you, please,
Don't send me Brownies
Or I will be full of anger

ID: imimxo
Favorite Game: Bakery Story
Item Used: Brownies

[faisal01911349250]

Whoa what happened to my earlier post in the bracket I wrote don't think I will and to da I check back and it's got some crazy writings how and why'd that happen?

[faisal01911349250]

Today not to da sorry

[rengirl1978]

The Tablet

In my kingdom there are no shards,
I’m running and gathering for yards.
My energy’s low,
But on I must go,
To the Tabernum for shards.

ID: rengirl1978
Fav Game: Castle Story

[bp34]

ID: bp34
Fav game: Bakery story



Jean Pierre, my friend once said
Had only a moustache to go with his head
Had a big chef hat
And as fierce as a bat
And was optimistic about the bakery we led.

[celina3005]

The Dilemma

There once was a girl who loved jewels,
Who was only limited by rules,
But she needed more gold,
At which matter she couldn't be consoled,
And that she considered a bad rule.

Gold to jewel mania
ID: celina3005

[wilchan_doo]

the son of Adam dragon hatched
all the eyes starred
when an apple came up quick
Eve dragon's going to be freak
n Adam dragon hit his head with a brick
17th fruitful dragon opened his eyes innocently
looking at his parents died slowly
so that's the end of dragon story

storm id: wilchan_doo
fav game: dragon story
gold please

[jsoakkskk]

ok... Here is my limerick...

Marly's Farm

There once was a girl named Marly
Her crops withered, they were gnarly
She hurried to replant
Thought, "oh no, I can't!
I have to watch my little brother, Charlie"

If I am a winner I would like my gems to go to Farm Story. Storm 8 id: jsoakkskk

Thanks!!! Good luck everyone!!!

[lelaina752]

Ode To Fashion Story

I love a good game about Fashion
Customers peruse my fine store with a passion
Purses, jewelry and shoes
How can one choose?
No matter, buy it all--you look smashin'!

Any gems to FS please. Thanks! :)

[maddymoose2002]

Thank you :) I'll try it next time the thing is it was my first time and i think our school is learning it next year. So im getting an early start. But anyway thank you so much!

[pokemon38]

Storm ID: pokemon38
Game: Dragon Story




There once was a dragon called tree
He was a fast dragon you see.
He tricked people with his name,
And quicker than he, he found fame.

[kandeegrlz]

Two halves of a heart were blessed
With the company of each others' chest
Said the Left to the Right
I bid thee good night
And awoke with Passion in the nest

Tribute to the Amorous Heart Trio of Dragon Story :)

[kandeegrlz]

Ode To Fruitful Dragon

A fruitful dragon I be
A jester for all to see
With my tongue stuck out
"I'll get that apple", I shout!!!
Thats been hanging from my head since I was three

Favorite Game: Dragon Story
ID: LilMzB4Life

So very cute!!

[kandeegrlz]

This was fun. :D


The Brash Baker

In the bakery down the road,
the ice cream machine did explode.
Rather than the trash,
the baker was brash,
and served everything A La Mode!


A La Mode is the name of my bakery on Bakery Story. :D

ID: jopazz
favorite game is Bakery Story!

LOL good one!

[kandeegrlz]

An Unfortunate Name

My dragon, named Pan, is a mess
It's the name I have to confess
He's a turkey you see
And he once said to me
The association is causing much stress

ID Kyrandia1
Dragon Story

Hilarious!!! I hope you win! :D

[jopazz]

I don't know how to quote, I wish I did. There are so many good ones. They are gonna have a heckuvatime choosing.

Ty for the compliment kandeegrlz.

[Miranda605]

Mion's Crave for Fashion!

Once there was a girl named Mion
Who really loved Fashion, ion , ion
She loved everything in the closet,
For Fashion she'd always deposit!
She loved the green dresses,
It meant her a lot that she gave them blesses!
She loved gems the most,
Because with the tiny pink gems she could buy everything and boast!
Even though she won't! ;)

ID: Miranda605
Game: Fashion Story

[123cheri]

Title: My Current Attitude Torwards Dragon Story.

There was once an island in the sky,
Where dragons live and fly high.
And what do I think?
There are no hybrids of pink.
Sadly this isn't a lie.

There is a night dragon named Poe,
He is friendly and never a foe.
His sons and daughters,
Are dragons of pure waters.
A terrible shame, yes, I know.

My dragons eat quite a lot.
They need more food than I've got.
Give me more farms,
They're eating my arms!
I need more food to crop.

I once heard of an interesting fable,
Of equality across the table.
Regardless of device,
Habitat increases are nice.
Provided the game remains stable.

And last I should mention a void,
Between iOS and mine Android.
I am so aghast,
That I cannot craft.
It is something I would have enjoyed.


Game of choice: Bakery Story.

[yusefzai]

Before, I must say thanks
But, .....

There was once a boy named Henry
He likes to play Dragon Story
One day, he shouted
"Okay, I'm addicted"
"I want gold for Dragon Story!"

They're all same rhyme ! :D


Will raredragonprobability be one of the judges? Sounds demanding heehee!

[unosocite]

Title: My Current Attitude Torwards Dragon Story.

There was once an island in the sky,
Where dragons live and fly high.
And what do I think?
There are no hybrids of pink.
Sadly this isn't a lie.

There is a night dragon named Poe,
He is friendly and never a foe.
His sons and daughters,
Are dragons of pure waters.
A terrible shame, yes, I know.

My dragons eat quite a lot.
They need more food than I've got.
Give me more farms,
They're eating my arms!
I need more food to crop.

I once heard of an interesting fable,
Of equality across the table.
Regardless of device,
Habitat increases are nice.
Provided the game remains stable.

And last I should mention a void,
Between iOS and mine Android.
I am so aghast,
That I cannot craft.
It is something I would have enjoyed.


Game of choice: Bakery Story.

LOL. Awesome


Scoops

Into the bakery walked Pat
She saw Jean-Pierre in his hat
"Vanilla ice cream please"
"That'll take 2 days!" he screamed
Ain't nobody got time for dat!

Storm8 ID: bercause
Game: Bakery Story

Lol. Ain't nobody

[LilMzB4Life]

Title: My Current Attitude Torwards Dragon Story.

There was once an island in the sky,
Where dragons live and fly high.
And what do I think?
There are no hybrids of pink.
Sadly this isn't a lie.

There is a night dragon named Poe,
He is friendly and never a foe.
His sons and daughters,
Are dragons of pure waters.
A terrible shame, yes, I know.

My dragons eat quite a lot.
They need more food than I've got.
Give me more farms,
They're eating my arms!
I need more food to crop.

I once heard of an interesting fable,
Of equality across the table.
Regardless of device,
Habitat increases are nice.
Provided the game remains stable.

And last I should mention a void,
Between iOS and mine Android.
I am so aghast,
That I cannot craft.
It is something I would have enjoyed.


Game of choice: Bakery Story.

Nice one!!! I feel your pain. I play DS on iOS and Kindle Fire. Crafting would be a nice addition to KF!!!

[koalas23]

Muffin the Puffin
There once was a puffin named Muffin,
Who always got in trouble for bluffin?.
His mother told him it was wrong
and the time-outs were long.
So now he doesn?t say nuffin?.



Gems to Fashion Story.
Reference to Pet Shop Story's puffin.

[FlyingMonkee]

The Contest is now closed for judging. Thank You to everyone for your entries and feedback on others!

[lmac10]

I thought the winners might have been announced by now?

[FlyingMonkee]

Winners will be announced by tomorrow. There are over 13 pages of limericks and the judges are hard at work reading and reciting the entries. A lot of the feedback on your entries help us to choose but we have to make sure all entries follow suit. =)


I thought the winners might have been announced by now?

[lmac10]

Thanks :)

[KKeatzrockz]

What about today? Are the winners posted yet?

[FlyingMonkee]

Congratulations to all the Winners! As well as a great round of applause to all who had entered. There were a lot of great and quirky entries. Check the first page for the Winners and for all winners the rewards will be coming in momentarily.

[koalas23]

Congratulations, poets! Lovely job!

[jonathanharker]

OMG! Yay! I won something! Thanks TeamLava! Thanks for posting the links too it was fun to read the winners.

[FlyingMonkee]

It was definitely fun and engaging when reading them aloud! Even better when you try in your best leprechaun voice =)

[kooky panda]

These were great!!! I also like that the links for each winner were put in post 1.

[jopazz]

Congratulations everyone, this was such a fun contest, and so interesting to read all the entries. I hope we have more poetry contests in the future!

[LilMzB4Life]

Thank you so... much TL!!! I really had fun with this contest.Congrats to all the winners as well. Everyone who entered did a wonderful job!!!

[FrozenTurtle]

These were some really awesome limericks! Thanks for sharing, everyone!

[thatgirl444]

Congrats to all the winners....I had fun reading them all....Well deserved!!! And my fav with the grinning fly won (LOL)

[kisseop]

Congrats to winners and.......to all contestants, you guys were amazing!!!

[rengirl1978]

Congrats winners!

[Shini02]

Omg...I can't believe I won. Ty teamlava! I loved this contest. hope we have more poetry contests in the future. *flails*

[designersae]

I always lose :(

[Bakemoo]

I was slightly confused as to why my gem count was way more than I thought it was... lol! Thanks guys! =)

[chocolat_89]

Yay, thank-you very much! That was a fun contest!

[kyrandia1]

Congratulations to the winners, I really enjoyed reading them all and my own personal favourite won as well, well done JonathanHarker!

[yusefzai]

I always lose :(

Yey to us! I thought i really had a chance too... Oh well...
Congrats winners!

[OnCloudDivine]

I loved the creativity in this one! Great job, contestants!